hmmmm
he was looking for the answer but it didn't come out right. he was hoping for some sleep, just to get some sleep tonight. acts so cool when we talk, just like everything's ok... sometimes, sometimes i catch a glimpse of things he doesn't say. just when everything's a shoe-in, just when i've made up my mind; he'll come out and keep it simple: he can keep me in a bind. you know, this just isn't the fairest, not the fairest thing to do..cause i'm looking for the answer, cause....i'm looking for....you.
posted by Esperanza Rising @ 8:33 p.m.
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are we speaking of a certain person who's name starts with a D and ends with a d??
I was just wondering if this person is.... If I understood it fully i would say something other than this junk.
no, actually, i have no idea what this poems about...and the d thing is over...so, yeah.
I like this a lot, Mia! I think I always sound stupid when I try to ryme my poems but this one realy flows well!
I got to talk to you, girl. stuff's happnin...
[coagulatedknees]
ah, well it is a really cool poem!
yes, this one WAS pretty good. I keep getting the feeling i'm missing something....
ur not, there's really not that much to it...I started out writing a different poem, and this one came out. I thinki i'll write the other one now...
wow. I wasn't sure at first if you'd written this or if it was from something. lol. this is very good! I am awful at writing poems these days..
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